Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Sweet Memory. Comments

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As I close my eyes, I feel your breath
Trip softly past my ear
Your touch so gentle, feather like
Now brush away my fears
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Graham Jones
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Brian Dorn 03 November 2006

Amazing write, Graham and a particularly great final stanza. Great write from beginning to end! ! Brian

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