Sunday, July 12, 2009

Sweet Memories..... Comments

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Remember, the 1st year of your life
You started your journey to getting old!

Remember, those 1st friends
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seemakhera (Aanamika 805)
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Ted M 12 July 2009

** Great wise words here. We spend our little time, bickering, fighting instead of being nice to our fellow-beings. If everybody thinks on these lines, the whole world would be a better place to live in. Very nice message, Great flow, all in all a very beautiful poem with great rhyme. 10+++

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