Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Sweet Meat Cleaver Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet meat cleaver...
May your sharpened blade,
Be swung to come down swiftly...
To silent false lips attached to crooked necks.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Joseph Poewhit 13 January 2009

Poem comes across strong and clear. Let the others fight and we pocket the gold.

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Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009

Good strong write Lawrence....thank you..Fi

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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