Sweet Lullaby Comments

nice work.4,5,6, & 7th lines seems like a long sentence. i guess u have to work it over and try to break it poetically. god bless

it's short but it's so sweet and caring i loved it truly it was an amazing little piece! ~Hazel G.E

I love it, its sweet and it reminds me a lot of my cousin who is 2 he stays with me a lot. It shows little kids affection towards his mother and I aprove.10

a lullaby in return...good piece 10

It's like one of the greatest paintings on Mother and Child. You have described it so beautifully in so few words. I love it.10 from me.

A very sentimental moment shared with a child is worth more than money itself. very well written and a pleasure to read.10/10 Regards Dave T

Sweet lullaboy seems to be really sweet to be an inspiration for writing poems