Monday, January 11, 2010

Sweet Lullabies (1/11/10) Comments

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Sweet lullabies
Carry me away
Like a mid Autumn's breeze
And I'll dance with the leaves that sway and float down
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Kayleigh ....
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Caitlin Walczyk 11 January 2010

You are a good writer. Your descriptions are very nice. One suggestion, though. Poems fit in a nicer package when you make each line about the same amount of syllables and length. Keep writing!

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