Wednesday, August 9, 2006

Sweet La-La-Bye Comments

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Sweet La-la-bye whispered in my ear
Comforting me through my worst fear
Making my body feel at ease
Crying tears that no one else sees
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Michelle Guza
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Stuart Mason 09 August 2006

Has a lulling quality though i couldn't decide whether i liked sweet la-la bye or perhaps added an extra bye. Anyway, is that sposed to be 'late' in line 10?

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