Friday, November 21, 2014

Sweet Ilussions Comments

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In the loneliness of sorrow,
One light shines so timidly,
It's the light of sweet illusions,
That speak gently, cradles me,
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Sandra Feldman
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Daniel Brick 27 November 2014

You give four examples of what are supposedly ILLUSIONS but they come across loud and clear as themes you have addressed in your poems, In fact your poetic voice is so distinctive it makes even an outlandish scheme seem to be a plausible gambit if it benefits others.Politicians and business people can be cynical, Poets have to be altruistic, generous in thought and deed.Poets cannot afford to be mean-spirited and small-minded. That should be a no brainer!

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Bill Cantrell 25 November 2014

Another great poem, my friend

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