Thursday, March 30, 2017

Sweet Horn Of Train Comments

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One train has departed, another has arrived,
City station is enlightened by touch of hope,
Remembering God's message men move,
Purity is poured by sun on station at morning.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2020

Slowly train is blowing horn! ! Means of transportation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2020

Slowly, slowly train is blowing horn to blow, Glowing light of sun is becoming powerful, Speed of train has slowed down will be speed, Along with time this train will move very fast. powerful observation dear poet. thank u very much dear Kumaramani. tony

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Pushpendra Patel 02 March 2019

Journey of life is like a train's journey. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 September 2018

A fascinating and lovely poem. It captures the wonderful attributes of train. Very informative and well crafted write.10+++

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Bharati Nayak 02 June 2017

Journey of life so nicely reflected through this poem. To quote from the poem- - Train understands that time is pure precious, According to time train also will not wait, At right time there will be sure departure, Super destination is ahead, train has to reach. Specified ambition will be fulfilled of travellers, As they travel toward God's home in unity, Every soul is unique inside train of life carrier, Mind is train, meditation is power and we proceed.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2017

A beautiful metaphor of life. Life is a journey and men are like trains.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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