Sunday, May 21, 2006

Sweet Earth Comments

Rating: 4.0

See the little piggies
submerged in the black drowning Mud of
our time. See them
they are dying a sweet
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Ballerina With Fins
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Francesca Johnson 21 May 2006

This is most original, Ballerina. I felt like I was suffocating as I read it. Will read it a few more times. I do like your poetry and will look out for more. Love, Fran xx ps thank you for changing the title of your poem about middle-aged lovers. Your word 'couple' was better than the 'spouses' I suggested.

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