I’m Lost!
I’m trying to find my way home
From work;
Hopping from bus to bus
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I know poet's are not meant to comment on their own poems, so I will not. Just to thank you Kim Schilling for your kind assessment which you sent to me privately. Glad you liked it. And DONNA - sign up to Poemhunter and you can comment too! You can even comment on Shakespeare if yu wish - he's not bad.
Your final stanza is somehow in itself so very... telling, true, accurate... I can sure relate to this one. (If a reader can relate, that's the mark of a grand piece, in my opinion) . t x