Monday, April 6, 2009

Sweet Defeat Comments

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as a watch time pass me by
scenes of loneliness flash across my weary mind
i wish i could just close my eyes
and forget about the night's blinding light.
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deborah mae lacay
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Yll L 08 June 2009

i used this word to describe the sad things happen in my way.....but its not really a defeat tis one way i conquer d arena of tomorrow with high hopes....heheheh' keep it up kid....

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 06 April 2009

dont accept defeat and its not really defeat its still a battle hold on u r a very eloquent poet and i admire ur words keep writing. ur friend - mel

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