Saturday, September 23, 2017

Sweet Death Comments

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The day of freedom finally reached, form the life hook
The last lines of the last page of my life book
If Leaving is hard and harder is the abandonment
But both are somehow sweet at the moment
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Akhtar Jawad 05 May 2018

I am the happiest for this freedom and passage after all No doubt it is not the end, But a new life and world I call Death so nicely painted, that it becomes a dream.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2017

The beginning arena of this poem is fantastic. It is beautifully crafted on life and death. Our soul is immortal and it will take next birth. Dear Hassan, you have inscribed this nicely. Let it be quoted..... For the broken hearts Salvation is the reward As the Almighty has promised with regard I am the happiest for this freedom and passage after all No doubt it is not the end, But a new life and world I call Thank u for sharing.

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Hassan Hayati 16 October 2017

Thank you for your attention. I think poets and other of those being in Art, somehow must try to show that death is not a strange event. maybe a new episode or stage of life.

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Unwritten Soul 28 September 2017

When all is nothing, God is all and healing..............we found Him.

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Hassan Hayati 02 October 2017

yes we will find him a day, world is the stage and we leave this stage after our role is over, hope we play our role the best, as others always remember us. Thank you for reading my poem

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