Monday, August 24, 2009

Sweet Crimson Cuts Comments

Rating: 5.0

watching the blood slowly creep its way down.
flowing like a cascade.
its crimson beauty hypnotizing.
the smell of salt and rust intoxicates me.
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Leah Farmer
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 August 2009

The surreal of the balde that bleeds your heart out, depicted beautifully, im so mesmerised.You sure have the sweetest cut on this virgin poem of yours.Keep it up Leah.

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