Monday, June 7, 2010

Sweet Cheeks Comments

Rating: 5.0

More valuable than silver and gold
Is this Beauty I wish I could hold
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Eyan Desir
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Miriam Maia Padua 01 July 2010

Very sweetly written.. very lovely to read...like a melody to one's ear Maia

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Marieta Maglas 21 June 2010

Vividly written and interesting to read. Excellent poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 June 2010

sweet...enjoyable read...10

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awww! ! that wuz so sweet. and it just expressed your feelingz so well... ur an amazing writer eyan. i hope u get ur girl.

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Lady Grace 08 June 2010

ur baby's sweet cheeks is as sweet as cheesecakes is as red as melon is as delicious as wine... ur work is nicely done...smileeeeeeeeee

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