Friday, December 18, 2015

Sweet Cascades Comments

Rating: 4.2

The graceful dancing twigs
made by the excruciating breeze of the fresh air,
I am completely and clearly relaxed, as clear as the cascading river
How peaceful it is,
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Rita Endrina
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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2016

Insightful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and subtly penned in poetic diction with conviction. Lovely depiction of the serenity and beauty of nature, in contrast with other other aspects of life. Thanks for sharing Rita. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Manonton Dalan 01 January 2016

mahusay....salamat sige sulat pa

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Dutendra Chamling 21 December 2015

Rita Endrina! Beautiful poem!

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Rita Marie Endrina 02 January 2016

Salamat po!

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Jamie Veloso 18 December 2015

WOW. nice one rit! Great job!

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Rita Marie Endrina 19 December 2015

Hahahha XD

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