Monday, December 8, 2008

Sweet Betrayal Comments

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The hardest part to face in this betrayal is
The sweetness with which you declared it
You have our friend believing you care
That you only had my welfare at heart
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Tia Maria
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Fay Slimm 13 December 2008

Yes it must be the hardest betrayal to face Tia - and we feel for you if this has been your experience...... my lovely sister is my sister-in-law, and as I never had a sister of my own I treasure her love. I know this must be hard for you to even write about - - but you have made good poetry here and it's tops from Fay.10+ + +

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Kris Smith 08 December 2008

Tia that is one sad poem, brave girl 10 Chris

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Lynda Robson 08 December 2008

To be betrayed by anyone is awful but when its your sister then that is so bad, trusting won't be easy ever again, 10 Lynda xx

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