Sequestered deep in mystic realms
`Midst all the stars in full display
Encircled there by misty souls
I heard her sad soliloquy
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Just beautiful and full of imagery. Like rhyme scheme too. Love reading your work!
Perfect imagery for a beautiful poem. Love the meter. Well penned.
I would almost swear I commented on this before. I think it has that classical feel of perfection that makes you think you must have encountered it- somewhere, sometime before- or else, PH is hiding my comments from me again. Anyway, it's really something; majestic, poetic, timeless and exquisite.
This is so very beautiful, a truly fantastic poem, really love it.
Yet another little gem from the mind of Valerie, haunting and dreamlike. I'd swear I can hear Harps playing in the background! Well done.
Dear sweet Angeline, That was such a wonderful poem, I loved every verse, it was so descriptive.
I love the beautiful images that your words inspire and the haunting feeling of elusive love
Undiscovered love projected through romantics imaginings, maybe we are all guilty of such desires at some time as overly dramatic as they may later seem on reflection. A good poem to explore the concept. Lovely rhymes and lyrical tone.
Love yourself first! Oh how I love this beautiful poem, gently and sorrowful with a poinant message at the end