Monday, March 26, 2012

Sweet Angeline In Heav`n Did Weep Comments

Rating: 4.4

Sequestered deep in mystic realms
`Midst all the stars in full display
Encircled there by misty souls
I heard her sad soliloquy
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Valerie Dohren
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Stevie Taite 05 September 2012

Love yourself first! Oh how I love this beautiful poem, gently and sorrowful with a poinant message at the end

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Linda May Fox 20 June 2012

Just beautiful and full of imagery. Like rhyme scheme too. Love reading your work!

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Walterrean Salley 04 April 2012

Perfect imagery for a beautiful poem. Love the meter. Well penned.

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Patti Masterman 02 April 2012

I would almost swear I commented on this before. I think it has that classical feel of perfection that makes you think you must have encountered it- somewhere, sometime before- or else, PH is hiding my comments from me again. Anyway, it's really something; majestic, poetic, timeless and exquisite.

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Dave Walker 27 March 2012

This is so very beautiful, a truly fantastic poem, really love it.

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Kevin Halls 27 March 2012

Yet another little gem from the mind of Valerie, haunting and dreamlike. I'd swear I can hear Harps playing in the background! Well done.

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Heather Wilson 26 March 2012

Dear sweet Angeline, That was such a wonderful poem, I loved every verse, it was so descriptive.

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Lucy Lae 26 March 2012

I love the beautiful images that your words inspire and the haunting feeling of elusive love

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Danny Draper 26 March 2012

Undiscovered love projected through romantics imaginings, maybe we are all guilty of such desires at some time as overly dramatic as they may later seem on reflection. A good poem to explore the concept. Lovely rhymes and lyrical tone.

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