Sunday, January 7, 2018

Sweet And Bitter Boomerang Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is sweet
If it's meant for you
And if it's all yours
No matter how far slips
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Rini Shibu
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 April 2018

Hi Rini, Boomerang has a negative tinge in its meaning. So, in the first part of your poem, the positivity inetended by you woes not come out the wat you have tried to.

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Rini shibu 24 April 2018

Is it..Thank you so much for your view point

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

Your 'Sweet And Bitter Boomerang' is elegantly crafted Rini, Liked it......10

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Thanks Dillip for your great comment

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 January 2018

A very lovely and insightful write. Loved the first 2 lines.10

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Rose.. Rini

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Lamar Cole 07 January 2018

This is a very thought invoking poem about sweet and bitter boomerang.

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your comment Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2018

No matter how far slips! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Edward Kofi Rini

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