Tuesday, March 27, 2012

Sweet Adieu Comments

Rating: 4.3

Another endless debate,
Dares to cripple my leal faith.
Another's - I can't borrow,
Theirs are more ameliorate.
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Geovanni Leaño
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 01 September 2012

i love the last lines.. so perfect

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 16 April 2012

Love this piece..sweet sad sonnet with a tragic ending..love how the words were weaved..emotions conveyed..10 from me keep writing. :) +

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Geovanni Leaño

Geovanni Leaño

Zamboanga City
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