Friday, August 3, 2018

Sweet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mother's tone is very sweet
We should behave her sweetly,
The fragrance of chrysanthemum
Is sweet ever and of champac.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Captain Cur 08 August 2018

Interesting write utilizing the concept of sweet and sour in an imaginative way. Sweets for the sweet, then a bitter pill to follow!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 August 2018

Some fruits are sweet! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 05 August 2018

You are absolutely right! Too much of anything is not good! Everything in moderation is preferred to anything in excess!

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 August 2018

interesting philosophical note on sweet nice

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2018

A wonderful poem that has a meaningful message. The last stanza says it all. Well crafted.10++++

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Akhtar Jawad 03 August 2018

Both mother and mother nature are sweet. A lovely poem on sweetness.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2018

Beautiful poem with sweet message. Too much of sweet sometimes tastes bitter as well.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2018

a poem a day keeps all happy and gay...and see your own words only what they say We can't only say sugar or Honey or confection is sweet some weaterners guys call gfs and wives SUGAR SOME HONEY WHO IS SWEET CAN YOU TELL ME..OKAYI will not being funny the one who has lots of money s far sweeter than any sugar or honey as money can buy a day and night that's why so many her edon't like to marry till they are old enough to say they have had enough What say thee Shree KM JI

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 August 2018

Be care, sweet has demerit behind it/Too much of anything is harmful..........When someone crosses limit, it's very difficult to come back to baseline! A sweet poem! Thank dear sir for sharing..10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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