Thursday, October 24, 2019

Sweat Communal Can't Get Comments

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Be it stench of labour's sweat
Or be it sewage for that,
Communal scarce can it get.
Alike following the fates
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2019

Be it stench of labour's sweat Or be it sewage for that, Communal scarce can it get.....an insightful inscription. Beautiful poem is amazingly shared.Poet's not makes a readers' clear understanding.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 October 2019

I am entering this feedback again and will be brief. I feel sometimes that Poet's Note is necessary, for, I don't believe in creating deliberate confusion. Thanks for visiting

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Rajnish Manga 24 October 2019

These are no small reflections but the reality of our time. Those who remain oblivious of hard realities of life live in a fool's paradise. Thanks for sharing a very thought provoking piece of poetry.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 October 2019

Yes, indeed, two workers pouring their sweat are closer than two persons of the same community. Thanks for the good words.

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