Wednesday, June 12, 2019

Swayed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Swinging in darkness
in a house
suspended by unseen ropes or chains
where the creak and moan of movement
...
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Jenny Kalahar
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Shaun Cronick 29 August 2019

A powerful pendulum of a poem. Superbly imagined and brilliantly delivered.Tthank you for writing and sharing this Jenny.10+++ and added to my poem list. And I thank you again. Take care.

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Jenny Kalahar 29 August 2019

Wow - thank you! So happy you enjoyed it, Shaun! - Jenny

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Hassan Hayati 24 June 2019

Excellent, I really enjoyed reading this poem. getting utmost feeling of a piece in a language other than your own mother tongue. this is what I can say,

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Jenny Kalahar 25 June 2019

What you can say is a lot, and I thank you! - Jenny

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C F 15 June 2019

A very creative write... your poems continue to amaze me.10+

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Jenny Kalahar 15 June 2019

Thank you, Chito! I'm so glad you like it! - Jenny

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Joy Johnson 12 June 2019

This is a great poem peace of work you were very creative and its lenghtly clearly stated nice English Poem

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Jenny Kalahar 13 June 2019

Thank you very much, Joy! - Jenny

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 June 2019

A magnificent poem, dear Ma'am Jenny....10+++++++++

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Jenny Kalahar 13 June 2019

Thanks so much, Bernard! - Jenny

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Jane Campion 12 June 2019

Swayed plays through this poem in a wonderful way. Thamks Jenny. Your poetic momentum continues unabated.

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Jenny Kalahar 13 June 2019

Thank you, Jane! And I love your choice of words! - Jenny

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Jenny Kalahar

Jenny Kalahar

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