Swinging in darkness
in a house
suspended by unseen ropes or chains
where the creak and moan of movement
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Excellent, I really enjoyed reading this poem. getting utmost feeling of a piece in a language other than your own mother tongue. this is what I can say,
This is a great poem peace of work you were very creative and its lenghtly clearly stated nice English Poem
Swayed plays through this poem in a wonderful way. Thamks Jenny. Your poetic momentum continues unabated.
A powerful pendulum of a poem. Superbly imagined and brilliantly delivered.Tthank you for writing and sharing this Jenny.10+++ and added to my poem list. And I thank you again. Take care.
Wow - thank you! So happy you enjoyed it, Shaun! - Jenny