Monday, May 26, 2008

Sway Soul, Sway Comments

Rating: 5.0

My soul sways peacefully
Scattered through the universe
I spill drops, uneasy
My eyes cannot retire
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Ana Ónimo
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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 August 2008

...a fine composition.........10

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Roland Bastien 28 May 2008

You traveled into a holistic idea of space like a subatomic particle at 55 miles per second - GREAT- you got it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2008

if soul could sway like waltz dancing................would be great.

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