Saturday, October 21, 2006

Sway Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Full moon jags
Round this little town
Swinging low and deep
Within without a sound
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Tailor Bell
COMMENTS
Sandra Fowler 05 February 2007

Lyrical, playful and altogether charming. Wonderful write, Tailor. Warm regards, Sandra

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Not a member No 4 25 January 2007

A terrific personification of that big prisoner of ours, that big searchlight in the sky, Tailor. And you give it such a knowing and playful character too. This is a pretty likeable moon. How could we resist going out for a bit of fun with this cheeky guy who's also sharp-eyed and decent enough to point out where our loose change is lying! It - sorry, he/she, is going to look a whole different to me from now on. Wizard writing as usual. jim

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Melvina Germain 27 October 2006

I find this truly artful piece of poetry very sensual, seductive and naughty in a way. I love it, great job Tailor.---Melvina---

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Alison Cassidy 26 October 2006

Tailor, this is a brilliant shining poem - lyrical and seductive. The moon followed me home tonight and now I find your Sway Moon. Serendipity perchance? love, Allie xxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 October 2006

tAILOR...LONG TIME...HOW HAVE YA BEEN? ....Nice succinct write, here...I enjoyed th' Read''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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gone gone 21 October 2006

Tailor Gorgeous painting, this poem.......wonderful...thanks! ! Love, D.

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Patricia Gale 21 October 2006

Splendid piece Tailor, well done!

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Sean North 21 October 2006

i lovezzz it Tailor, , , , MoSt EnJoYaBLe

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