Wednesday, May 4, 2005

Swastika Comments

Rating: ★1.5

Like a trick
you crawled up Hitler's sleeve,
a crooked cross with bent arms,
two cursed S's twisted together
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Chris Tusa
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Rich Hanson 04 May 2005

I agree with Jacob. The first two stanzas worked very well, but the closing left me disappointed.

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 04 May 2005

i really like this poem, but syntactically, the last stanza isn't expressed very clearly. Jake

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Chris Tusa

Chris Tusa

New Orleans, Louisiana
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Chris Tusa
New Orleans, Louisiana
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