Thursday, June 8, 2006

Swansong Comments

Rating: 5.0

A poor ferryman is crossing the quiet river
and suddenly she changed into a whirlpool.
The swing bridge is in full swing
with the east wind
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nimal dunuhinga
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Allemagne Roßmann 15 September 2011

well penned..fantastic write wow!

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Leigh A. Hill 10 June 2006

how completely beautiful and original! never have i read a poem like this! love starr

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Sandra Fowler 08 June 2006

What a fascinating story. The symbolism here is very disturbing. The loss of innocence imminent. I pity the poor ferryman's tears, Swansong is a sad song indeed., But excellent writing as usual. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Amanda Lukas 08 June 2006

Quite a lovely tale. Your individuality in style shines brightly here.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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