Monday, September 12, 2005

Swan Feather Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wounded swan, still beautiful –
Spreads wings she feels
Are broken –
Determined still to climb again
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Kelly Vinal
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Diane Violet 03 December 2007

Oh my very beautiful and inspiring! All the best, Diane

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Trucker Jeff 08 September 2006

You put together a book of poetry and I will buy it. I wonder after your message what this may be about.

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Trucker Jeff 08 September 2006

simply awsome

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 13 September 2005

Beautiful.....A tear came to my eyes.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 September 2005

No hawk......no gravity... Excellent. H

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 12 September 2005

Good poem, Kelly. Very inspiring. Thank you.

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Raynette Eitel 12 September 2005

This is beautiful in every way and poignant. Your last line completes it well. Raynette

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Uriah Hamilton 12 September 2005

Very inspiring, I'm sure you will write other great poems with that pen.

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Mary Nagy 12 September 2005

Very beautiful poem Kelly...........I really enjoyed this one. I hate to say it reminds me of the swan my husband hit with his truck (accidental of course) ....it didn't end up so beautifully though.....................he ate it. lol (true) Wonderful poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

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