Saturday, July 11, 2009

' ' ' ' Swallow...Swallow...Little Swallow! (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 2.7

Gazing at the sky
an angel with marble wings
forgets how to fly
pinned as it is to the earth
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Dónall Dempsey
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Kerry O'Connor 11 July 2009

You capture the heart-break in so few words. A beautiful poem.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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