Across the sky is a blaze of gold
When the dawn quietly begins to unfold
Each morn is a fresh wonder
As the night willfully bows down to surrender
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The vivid portrayal of Nature with its wonder, fragrance and glistening is so allaying and calming to he mind and it seems Valsa has no end of Natutre poems in her kittty! A SPLENDID WRITE !
This is a very detailed write of nature in all of its beauty, scents and glimmer. To awake and see the sunrise just before the break of dawn is really a beautiful sight. Just to sit in the backyard and commune with nature is a relaxing and soothing event. You wrote this one in all splendor.
A breathtaking write of splendour and beauty of nature as morning unfold it's new and captivating presence!
the poem is a glorious tribute to the miracle of revival with each dawn!
every morn is new and as fresh as the newly born dew..Nice poem, Valsa George..
every morn is new and as fresh as the newly born dew..Nice poem, Valsa George..
A fine morn is well-drawn with utmost care and beauty. Please consider, kindly, to enrich this wonderful verse with a message, along with the personal realization that satiates your good self (opinion of an instant browsing) . God Bless. Rgds.
The canvas is large and you have drawn all the possible images on it Madam Valsa! We in India and Pakistan need no other Independence day gift from you if you don`t post any other work till the 15th of August.
There is some sense of self realisation in this poem. ITs more than a sense. It is the essence I believe. The realisation of the beauty. As ever you have painted beautifully ma'am!
you have painted a very beautiful morning scenery in your poem. i was fully drowned in the morning glory.....a very nice poem Mam
Imagery presented in a spectacular ars poetica rhymin way so refreshin n lovely to read. Way to go valsa with yor rhapsody. Pls chk out my nuts poem.
what a beautiful imaginary conception captured in ink.the melody of nature smiles on each pal of its creation. here pal is the indian words which i determine most tinniest than a second..xlent n praiseworthy. nature is itself a panorama which i view in your poem.
Beautiful indeed Valsa, you have painted so many sublime scenes with your words. A lovely read.
A pen-click from the Nature...graphic and beautiful as is always expected from you...! ! !
Beautiful melody coming from the heart to sing glories of nature. Sweet poem with a nice flow. Thank you.
A beautiful poem that flows and rhymes very well, I can see myself there surrounded by all this nature.
An excellent flow of rhyme and imagery. Thanks for sharing.
it's drawing those moments in your thoughts when you and Nature become one.
'My heart leaps up when I behold a rainbow in the sky'...is a tradition of classic poetry that you've followed nicely. I enjoyed the poem and feel it's divinity in my heart, dear Valsa ma'am.
As Nature thus pipes a thousand songs In capturing sounds and melodious tunes In my heart is born a melody That I shall pour out in euphonic rhapsody.....nice poetic expression. This is really A beautiful poem on nature having vivid and incisive depiction.10