Monday, April 1, 2013

Sustained Love Comments

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When your heart with love is sustained
It cannot be kept locked and contained
When the person you love is pained
The love glistens with the tear ingrained.
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chandra thiagarajan
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Captain Cur 02 April 2013

Refrains of lines one and two, sustained love will not be contained, then the fitting climax in the last two lines. Very beautiful write.

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Valsa George 01 April 2013

When hearts overflow with love, truely we are in a state of bliss and make many lives blissful. I feel that your verse flows from the fulness of a loving heart! I do love them! !

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Kelvin Owusu 01 April 2013

a lovely poem, the ups and downs of love this was a nice read

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