When your heart with love is sustained
It cannot be kept locked and contained
When the person you love is pained
The love glistens with the tear ingrained.
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When hearts overflow with love, truely we are in a state of bliss and make many lives blissful. I feel that your verse flows from the fulness of a loving heart! I do love them! !
Refrains of lines one and two, sustained love will not be contained, then the fitting climax in the last two lines. Very beautiful write.