Monday, April 28, 2014

Suspends The Sun Comments

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Suspends the sun above Earth’s rim
Golden galluses hold the scene
Purple ribbons drape the clouds
All is still
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Charlotte Gunther
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

Beautiful use of metaphor..life is such rise of fall of fate depends on time..time of the individual and not as a general.. sun never dies..but plays a game of hide and seek..i am not seeing some other one is seeing a well composed poem thank you

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