Madam wouldst thou be offended.
Should I address myself to thee,
disrespect is not intended
but I admire that which I see.
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I like your poem. Saint or silver tongued devil, he is direct, and I can respect that. I would like to know the end of the story. Did he break her heart or prove to be a good hearted fellow after all?
You already know I'm a huge fan of yours, :) You're a wonderful poet, and a very skillful storyteller. I loved this poem, it's flawless as usual. Very nice job, Ivor.