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Facing the world with a heart as hard as stone,
No emotions linger in this canvas that bears no soul,
Stating the obvious to be hated by all,
As this psychopathic daze buries me in a deeper hole.
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We are running into our own annihilation. Dishonesty and lies have already set hard in the minds. Liked the way you have brought to the notice to the people this bitter truth. 'Everyone is a hostage of their own guilt, As everyone is a suspect of telling these lies, The sum of all fears begins with you as always, And it remains as boundless as the skies.' is very nice. Congrats.
Congrats. It's poem of thoughts. The whole world is going on the wrong way. The age of survival of the fittest was even better than this age. Perhaps we were better humans when we lived in the caves.
a sad emotionally charged poem of what can happen when things go wrong in one's life? superbly written JK
Congratulations! This is nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. This is very wisely penned thought provoking poem. Everyone is a hostage of their own guilt, . As everyone is a suspect of telling these lies, everyone feels guilty from inside. Everyone fears from inside due to faults. Personality should be decorated well with values, ethics, truth and trust. Excellent poem is presented...10
Such a great write, Joanne.... congrats for being chosen once again.... a perfect 10+++++
You can tell the poet in the room. The one with bruises, writing. Turning pain into beauty. Turning darkness in to ripples of emotion that bump gently into other hearts, making us all feel less lonely.
Of all good feature of this wonderful poem, I value most your marvelous paraphrastic applications. Congrats for being the PoD. Thank you for sharing. X
A well crafted poem full of emotion. Liked every stanza of it. flow and rhyming are so nice. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
Do you ever log in to this site anymore? You have not submitted anything new in more than six years. Here's hoping you are well and happy.
I know this is an incredibly late response, I'm sorry. I lost my password and forgot that I was putting stuff up on here. Everything's fine thank you.
Congrats on having this chosen as poem of the day. My favorite part: Everyone is a hostage of their own guilt, As everyone is a suspect of telling these lies, The sum of all fears begins with you as always, And it remains as boundless as the skies. Well done!
Joanne..my god gurl how you have grown...in such a fabulastastic way..can i steal your soul? all peace is all good! glen
I love the words 'as you become predator instead of prey' - magic. Thanks for this, I really enjoy the style and flow you have - steve
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7/26/2025 1:35:23 AM # 1.0.0
I am the one who knows no loner, good one