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আমার আকাশ নিঃসঙ্গ পড়ে রয়! .....this is central point of the poem which says much of life. This expression translated in Bengali language has much sweetness. Thanks for sharing this poem here with us.
Yes, you have rightly picked the line, which indeed is the central point of the poem. I am honored to have this appreciation from a poet whose mother tongue is not Bangla. Thank you so very much, dear poet @Kumarmani Mahakul.
ভ্রমহীন চোখের সামনে সবাই চলে যায় অন্তরালে রয়ে যায় শোকস্তব্ধ প্রাণ
Thanks for expressing your thoughts on the poem through these beautiful three lines, @Mahtab Bangalee.
Thank you for translating my poem into your language. That was a very thoughtful thing to do for another writer! ! !
Dear Susan, It was a pleasure for me to translate your poem into my mother tongue, because I wanted my Bangla speaking friends to read your beautiful haiku and think about it. Appreciate your kind comment.