Monday, February 9, 2009

Survivor's Aid. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Compounding small troubles, clouds sweep across
Mind, and envelope the will at times, test
Out strengths, and feed doubt. We're at a loss
To understand why, but forcing our best
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Fay Slimm
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Kris Smith 09 February 2009

Your words bring beauty to the eye and warmth to the heart Fay, tremendous write Chris 10 ++++

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Fiona Davidson 09 February 2009

Another inspiring write Fay....your talent is wonderful....thank you...Fi...10++

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 February 2009

Talk about music in a poem! ! ! Wow. And I spotted no compromise. Excellent, Fay. Hx

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Can I be a peace within the boxes of this Band Aid! ! ! It sings high on care and caress and your last line is a stunning instinct... set in as human survival story.. They delight in heartfelt peace which early forgives, so brings love's increase...... TENderly and with aroha Deana xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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