Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Survivor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silent lips, screaming heart
Putting together what fell apart

Finding clarity from confusion
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C.R. Clark 13 February 2009

This is a very well constructed poem, Kelly. Short and right on point.I like the way it ends. The one who survives is most often the one who simply refuses to quit.Best wishes. Richard

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~ Jon London ~ 10 February 2009

We live to fight another day, never submit never quit, goals are the gift

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