Thursday, January 14, 2016

Survivor Comments

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She is a survivor
It took a lot to be that
It took a pouring of tearful rain
And a shaking of sleepy earth
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2016

I have had to touch the sun To be the fire I am today I kept my eyes on the mountains And walked with swollen feet.. beautiful beautiful. your power of words, emotions, more than all the sense of the determination that you convey. life and success are for poets like you. go and until you reach your destination. if u want to be at the top of mount Everest aim first at the stars. thank you dear poetess. tony

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So you have touched the sun? Congrats my friend for this touching poem!

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 January 2016

We all are blessed with survival instinct. We are the designer of out fate, it's how we take life and pass all the hurdles with flying colors. You have penned it so beautifully. Love n duaz for this positive poem.10++++

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Nosheen Irfan 18 January 2016

Thank u Aarzo. Exactly we all r blessed with survival instinct. Thanks a lot for your beautiful comments that reflect your beautiful heart.

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Kelly Kurt 14 January 2016

Surviving with grace and dignity. Beautiful

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Nosheen Irfan 18 January 2016

Thank u Kelly.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 14 January 2016

An inspiring and encouraging poem....liked it....thank you for sharing :)

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Nosheen Irfan 18 January 2016

Thank u Abhilasha.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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