Wednesday, March 13, 2013
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Rating: ★4.5
I draw a distinct line. Between Infatuation,
and dedication.
With a stick of dignity is where I leave my mark,
In the sands of poetry. Where an ocean of infinite bliss exists.
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T Herndon
13 March 2013
This has a nice feel, to it. Only grammatical error, is: then your just dodging my light.Should be you're. Aside from that, it's good. I like it.
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7/26/2025 1:53:31 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you for the feedback tanner. I am aware of many grammer mistakes and punctuation errors in my poetry when I read them. I plan on a night of editing and fixing these mistakes. I have read your poems and am delighted you have found your way to my page. Critique is always welcome here.