Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Surviving Souls Crying Comments

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Much has been spoken on the fairytale earth land, but
Merely the minority has been heard by the present
The past cried loudly but people opt to not listen
Angels screamed and called but man’s ears were locked down
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Keith Anastase KAMOSSO
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So excellently penned. A rivoting write, strikes the core. Loved the last stanza, ending in the positve, holding onto hope. Restoration of souls. Well done, friend; D

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Marieta Maglas 10 May 2010

Very interesting and though provoking excellent written poem!

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Kelly Aragon 19 April 2010

That was deep..... and very true. I give it a 10 :)

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Keith Anastase KAMOSSO

Keith Anastase KAMOSSO

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