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What`s wrong with me is what`s ill in you.
You forced my hand and degraded my view.
And with a blade, you`ve placed me here,
Substituted my innocence with unending fear.
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Whoa this is very heavy indeed! Spoken from a tormented view and very powerful and striking in discordant measure across the reader heart. I hope this is not a reality for you, for no one should ever have to endure such things! This piece could be used to spur people who suffer from abuse to come forward and end their dilemma and torment for good. Dale :)
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8/2/2025 7:03:13 PM # 1.0.0
To me Brandi you have driven a nail right into the heart of this type torture. I can't imagine you being able to write this poem only if you lived it and if you did I'm terribly sorry for you pain. Good luck and this was an excellent write. Lynn