Tuesday, December 29, 2015

Survival Instincts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wiping her hands on the apron
Went to answer a call front..
There on the step stood,
a toddler whimpering
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Jaishree Nair
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Dimitrios Galanis 10 February 2016

You, dear Lady, can transform evryscenr to a alovely poerical point of you.

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Kelly Kurt 29 December 2015

A very honest, open minded look at the situation. There are always at least two sides to a story. Well written. Thank you, Jaishree

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 29 December 2015

a very beautiful description of an episode....I rememember a Hindi song naqli chehra samne aaye asli Surat chupi Rehe here the same thing follows and the woman remains in dilemma whom to blame? herself or the visitor.....she felt deeply concerned for the visitors...she made efforts to help them...but she was frauded by their condition.... their is one more thing to it....perhaps the visitor was compelled to do because he has no other option....this makes sense in a way that for belly one can do anything...very nicely composed lines...thanks for sharing

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