Friday, June 1, 2007

Survival Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drifting away into a sea of dreams
Straight into your arms
Meet by lips of golden kisses
Secure and safe on the isle of you
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Patricia Gale
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Sir Knight Of Words 01 June 2007

T'is passionate and dreamy this stuff of love.

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Graham Jones 01 June 2007

Beautifully written and that last stanza is just exquisite.

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