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Good composition....

smell of past bloodshed, people are provocating others to create hatred among people, , , , they are doing all these abeting works underthe twisted or unveiling the the substitude words yes, words ....good, sympathetic words...means nothing....only cunning eye wash..the acts are accounted.....the atmosphere is heavy...mind and soul are bleeding....this is the very sorry state of the modern human situation................who can survive the protagonist? ....we have to change ourselves....through consious aweareness.....this masage is coveyed in this poem...according to my understanding......thank you poetess for sharing so high class poem....please read my other poems