Sunday, April 19, 2015

Surrounded By People And Yet Alone Comments

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A stranger tried to revive her but to
no avail
A stranger stopped to help but all
efforts failed
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Herbert Dry
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Darlene Walsh 21 April 2015

A victim of violence, dying alone, is very sad. A wonderfully written poem. BTW, you should NEVER remove the knife. First, it hurts more coming out than going in. Second, it can damage evidence. And third and most important, removing the knife can make the bleeding much worse, resulting in death that medical first responders may otherwise be able to save.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2015

Wonderful stranger and wonderful poem shared really. Very wisely drafted.

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