Friday, December 19, 2008

Surrounded Comments

Rating: 4.8

One foggy day, one foggy night,
no sun, nor moon to give us light.
An opaque mist steals over all,
not see-through, just an eerie sprawl
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 29 December 2008

You have created a great picture here Ernestine, your descriptions are so precise that I felt I was there. Happy new year, love, Andrew xx

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Alison Cassidy 26 December 2008

This one takes the reader into the heart and soul of an English winter. The writing is stylish and elegant and the desolate mood is captured with great power. An excellent poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 21 December 2008

This sounds like the result of one of your walks across the fields eitherway it is very well written and reminds me of the time at stood at chessel beach and looked into the grey mist across the water, it seemed very barron Great writting again Ernestine Love duncan X

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