Friday, June 7, 2013

Surrender Comments

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In the luxury of darkness
I fall on your lap to dream
About part of life that’s is gone
Where the lamp of happiness flickered dim
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Lorraine Colon 20 June 2013

Sad poem, but beautifully written.

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Valsa George 20 June 2013

Don't surrender! This melancholic tone is depressing! Think that you have many more years to dream and there is sucess ahead for miles and miles!

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Yasmin Khan 08 June 2013

In the luxury of darkness a try to sustain hope though it ends in hopelessness.

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