Saturday, October 31, 2015

Surrender Comments

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I surrender unto my lord
Seek salvation from this world

Existence full of joy and misery
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Leela Chandra
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Chinedu Dike 06 December 2015

Lovely devotional piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely encapsulated in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. An insightful poem depicting total submission to His Will. Thanks for sharing Leela. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 31 October 2015

A nicely written piece, Leela

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Leela Chandra 01 November 2015

Thank you Kelly.

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Souren Mondal 31 October 2015

Existence full of joy and misery Leave behind a trail of slavery Gratitude for lessons learnt Ego and ignorance burnt . . . . Very well said, if only we could actually stop involving into excessive self-indulgence, we may well find salvation...

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Leela Chandra 01 November 2015

Thanks for your note Souren. Totally agree with you.

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