Surrender Comments
The waves were subtle
As you led me in
Half moon
Full moon
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in your mind a moment to to touch as well taste...woman is all she can be at that special moment...you bring that moment into view...on the sands...under the stars...a kiss...a hug...wow...speak of romance...shame has no room in a place of such ah's and ooo's...you let the seductiveness built...I say no more..but very candle-ish in that romantic way...thanks...
2 stanzas,1 poem, encapsulated in that serene surrender. Beautifully romantic.
A fantastic poem, to want and to be wanted is the best. a great write.
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7/19/2025 9:52:30 PM # 1.0.0
A sweet song of submission!