Friday, June 28, 2019

Surrender Comments

Rating: 5.0

He asked me to surrender -
All that was dear & precious to me
I offered, my money, my jewellery, my crystals
And every bit of external adornmentcarried upon my being
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Seema Jayaraman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2019

Thew greatest gift you offered after offering very asset is poetry which is the gift of love. A whisper is nuzzled and heart has tenderly accepted gift of love. Then soul is valued with love. A nice and expressive poem is beautifully presented. This is an excellent poem...10

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