Thursday, November 19, 2009

Surrender Comments

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One more look over my shoulder
One more thought of things I love
One more step into the distance
One more deep breath and off I go
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Fiona Davidson
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Raj Nandy 21 November 2009

The concluding stanza of this poem has been brilliantly rendered! 10! -Raj

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Fay Slimm 20 November 2009

Such a painful rise out of hurt and expressed here with dignified eloquence... the titile chosen is very apt too..... love from Fay.

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